Cheaters Never Win
Smelling of smoke, leather, and whiskey,
five rugged cowhands sit at a bar room table
and hold close the cards they've been dealt.
Jed, with a furtive glance
and a flip of his wrist,
swigs back another belt.
Never known to be cowardly,
he slips an ace from his sleeve,
lays his hand down, (Jed treads on dangerous ground).
"YOU'RE A CHEATER, JED JONES!" Frank bellows
as he bangs his fist on the table.
He begins to sputter and swing his gun around.
Jed leaps to his feet and runs for the door.
Frank shoots without blinking an eye.
Jed falls and lies still on the hard, cold floor.
With a sinister grin, Frank drawls,
"Cheaters never win and sometimes...they die.
So long, Jed Jones. Goodbye."
he slips an ace from his sleeve,
lays his hand down, (Jed treads on dangerous ground).
"YOU'RE A CHEATER, JED JONES!" Frank bellows
as he bangs his fist on the table.
He begins to sputter and swing his gun around.
Jed leaps to his feet and runs for the door.
Frank shoots without blinking an eye.
Jed falls and lies still on the hard, cold floor.
With a sinister grin, Frank drawls,
"Cheaters never win and sometimes...they die.
So long, Jed Jones. Goodbye."
Put a melody to it and you've got a country song! (i like it.)
ReplyDeleteI love it. This is so lively, Daisy, and I'm laughing. And he dies - ironic (given it's so lively and humorous). Amazing where the creative juices flow when working with prompts. I hope you'll keep doing these exercises.
ReplyDeleteAha! Good one, Daisy! I love it!
ReplyDeleteWe should go and hustle at a few tables, you and me! lol
Stunning piece of writing. I can't stand cheaters... had far too much experience with them.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely visiting Under the Porch Light this Thursday.. thank you for the recommendation!
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Wow, love this Daisy. You did an awesome job.Hope you have a nice week.
ReplyDeleteTerrific...of course...sometimes cheaters win lol. So glad you joined in and had some fun with the words.
ReplyDeletequite amusing and a step away from your style. Glad you had fun with Delores' prompts. Her blog is awesome
ReplyDeleteYou used the words very well, Daisy! Quite an interesting poem!
ReplyDeleteYou certainly did a creative job with the words provided, Daisy. The resulting poem was entertaining, even if the outcome wasn't so good for poor Jed.
ReplyDeleteOhhh, love it - great use of the words. I have been sitting on a poem for years since 1987 that I wrote for my dad. It contains a few of these words and it is about a card game where the last Ace shown won the game...
ReplyDeleteI love this poem of yours.
That was very good. Dramatic indeed but the words demanded that. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, everyone! I had fun playing around with this exercise.
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